WOW! we have some very talented people here on the forums...
I like the Font of the second image, but I feel the 2 is a bit out of place? stretched? IDK I can't place my finger on it... Maybe a II would be better? Or a colour change of the 2?
The first image is awesome and I can't see the mistake you have mentioned... (untrained eyes lol)
Looks like Rythal will have his work cut out for him (again) to decide what one to pick lol.
Both contestants (so far) have talent and I hope there is more entries so Rythal Literately can't choose lol